Comments on: fred’s farm http://banalasanything.wordpress.com/2009/07/01/freds-farm/ Just another WordPress.com weblog Sun, 25 Oct 2009 23:41:47 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: derek http://banalasanything.wordpress.com/2009/07/01/freds-farm/#comment-456 derek Wed, 01 Jul 2009 04:20:20 +0000 http://banalasanything.wordpress.com/?p=114#comment-456 if i was to represent this poem graphically i would make it a triangle, have the bracketed section at the apex, with the parts either side the base points. i would do it with a white-board marker. then i would say 'students! why have i done this?' & relax into my steaming coffee, reflecting, scowling. very good though. you've got the 'being' of being somewhere down. if i was to represent this poem graphically i would make it a triangle, have the bracketed section at the apex, with the parts either side the base points. i would do it with a white-board marker. then i would say ’students! why have i done this?’ & relax into my steaming coffee, reflecting, scowling.

very good though. you’ve got the ‘being’ of being somewhere down.

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